Hold Me
Please
Hold me; hold me in your arms.
Hold me now
I really need it.
Im not strong right now, I need you my protector.
Please hold me and let me fall apart in your arms
Hold me
Run your fingers through my hair...
As I cry in your arms.
Tell me its ok and not to cry.
Please hold me until I feel better
Until I stop crying
Please
I need you
I need your warmth and your comforting embrace
I need you... to hold me















Comments
Only thing I think you overused "..." a little, it looses its effect after a while
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yeah I felt the same about the "..." but I didn't know what else to use. I just kinda put what I was feeling I guess.
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I could also say I hate it, but I wold be afraid that it would be misunderstood.
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...love poetry???
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lets say powerful
yeah that is a good word
still nice work
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