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Hold Me…
Please…
Hold me; hold me in your arms.
Hold me now… I really need it.
I’m not strong right now, I need you my protector.
Please hold me and let me fall apart in your arms…
Hold me…
Run your fingers through my hair...
As I cry in your arms.
Tell me it’s ok and not to cry.
Please hold me until I feel better…
Until I stop crying…
Please… I need you… I need your warmth and your comforting embrace…
I need you... to hold me…
©2009 ~OkamiInu2
:iconokamiinu2:

Author's Comments

... I don't think I put this in the right place... but yeah...

T.T

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:iconjuanala:
I like it a lot... I feel often the same

Only thing I think you overused "..." a little, it looses its effect after a while
:icondeviantgen:
I love this poem.

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...love poetry???
:iconokamiinu2:
Thank you.

yeah I felt the same about the "..." but I didn't know what else to use. I just kinda put what I was feeling I guess.

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rawr
:icondeviantgen:
Ok, I don't even know what I just sent, if I even sent anything...damn cat, lol. Aaanyways...

I could also say I hate it, but I wold be afraid that it would be misunderstood.

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...love poetry???
:iconjuanala:
yeah it sometimes goes the same with me^^
:iconcask42:
well that was
lets say powerful
yeah that is a good word

still nice work

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